All Comments on 'Secret Smile'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
-whimpers-

i think..if i had been Karla..i would have died..in a very good way -grins-

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Yummy, But....

How'd she get the toy out?....great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Every sub's fantasy

excellent story.... one of the few worth reading again and again!

angelicscribeangelicscribeover 19 years ago
Loved the story, but also enjoyed the writing

i enjoyed the underlying tenderness and trust that resonate from these two characters. there is a deep connection between them that makes the play possible.

ladysubladysubover 19 years ago
Enticing!

Thank you for the... delicious story. Excellent one-handed reading! Would love to read more about Jack and Karla's D/s life.

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