All Comments on 'Seduced Succubus Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

seaman? Seriously?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

can't wait for next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

garbage.

"her struggles lessoned"

"the story of how I seduces "

"In one quick motion, waived a hand" (missing the I)

"grouping her wonderful breasts"

"seaman of enough men"

"may you're your body grow"

And..not interesting. Sad, boring crap.

So many other errors. Spellcheck.

LiteraryEroticaLiteraryEroticaover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you! I’m excited for the next part too!

And yep, I made a typo: seaman instead of seman.

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