All Comments on 'Seducing Brian Ch. 02: The Visit'

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BramblethornBramblethornalmost 4 years ago

Nicely developed characters and hot scenes. Easy 5 stars.

OfJaysandPinsOfJaysandPinsalmost 4 years ago
Fantastic!

Really enjoyed both of the current parts of this story. The second half, not really my thing, but doesn't mean it wasn't well thought out and well written! 5 Stars!

paulthewetcdpaulthewetcdalmost 4 years ago
Exceptionally Erotic!

Wonderful second story about Brian!

Love the way you have developed your relationship with him, letting both of your libidos shine!

Writing is excellent...capture the mood and sensuality and intimacy and eroticism.

This is great...keep writing!

NabzapokovNabzapokovalmost 4 years ago
Very good

I was afraid that with the intro of another man I wouldn't like it as much. Nothing against it, was just never my thing.

You did an exceptional job of bringing Simon in without losing any of the erotic and sexual tension.

Great story.

sl_davesl_davealmost 4 years ago
Excellent

Excellent writing, very sexy and well paced. Lovely story. Well done and thank you for sharing.

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My stories are usually detailed extensions of my fantasies. I write about what gets me off and the hotter the fantasy, the more I enjoy writing about it.

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