All Comments on 'Seducing Verónica Pt. 01'

Good start. Suggestion: Have a more aggressive lesbian break her in at the bar first.

Wheres the story?

Read because of title (yes, titles have value) and liked it because of potential. Otherwise too brief to decide whether the storyline and characters will resonate. Looking forward with hope.

Ouverture is promising and might later evolve to 5 stars but for a start 3 stars.

Looking forward to the next part.

You're off to a good start. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Author here. I'm new to writing stories on this site, I saw that many stories have "pages" and assumed that I would submit it chapter by chapter. It looks like I was supposed to submit it all at once. I'll finish up the story and then resubmit the longer one.

You are off to a good start. Looking forward to where this story leads to. There are a lot of possibilities.

Good story so far. Can't wait to see Veronica get turned out.

This is a good start but I have a feeling we are going to drown in clichés... 'Lesbians take rejection gracefully'... I am pretty sure that accepting rejection has to do with the person's character not his/her gender or sexual preference, but maybe I am just sexist. 1*

SEDUCING VERÓNICA PT. 01 when will part 2 and ending coming

SEDUCING VERÓNICA PT01 when is pt 02 and ending coming