All Comments on 'Seduction in Paradise Pt. 04'

You could make the chapters a page or two longer other than that really enjoying so far.

Thanks for that advice.

Silvermire and I have different opinions. I believe that the decision to serialize a story and where to place the breaks are the author's prerogative and only the author's prerogative. That doesn't mean that the readership may not express opinions and make suggestions, but it seems to me that at this stage, installment no. 4, you have earned our trust and I for one am willing to defer to your judgment.