All Comments on 'Seeing in Color 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Proof reading is a requirement.

Story drifted all over the place in the early paragraphs; could only imagine where it was headed.

Ultimately got to some basic sex, which was GOOD!

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