All Comments on 'Selena's First Time'

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oldjarhead1981oldjarhead19816 months ago

Not bad. Waiting for part 2

MissJackie43MissJackie436 months ago

I like this a lot. A little proofreading needed, but you've told your story well, inviting us into a deeply intimate moment. I hope you have lots more ideas for stories - including part 2.

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