by stripgnd
A true 5 star read! You’ve crafted an amazing final chapter of a terrific series and it is so well written. Spicy and erotic, yet also poignant! A tough combination but you’ve mastered it. I was glad to finally see Hanna lose a dare! And the bedroom scene at the hotel was soooo erotic. Thanks for taking us along for the evolution of Sophie!
Is this truly the end for Sophie and Hannah, well I suppose we all have to grow up sometime the hotel was lovely the sex scenes were erotic and spoke of love, and you said yes at Malham cove. One of our favourite places for Sunday walks, my late wife and I always enjoyed that part of the Yorkshire countryside as well as the lakes. And as usual your story was the best not coupled possibly be. Thank you. Bob. X
A really great read beautifully done - sad it had to end but it is complete so just a really well done thank you
Overall a 6. I do feel that for an exhibitionist her actions were not consistent with that claim. Out of an epic 12 chapters that is a very, very small piece of feedback.