All Comments on 'Selway Story'

by Missionarypossible

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WantingToWriteGoodWantingToWriteGood3 months ago

Good first story. I hope you will submit more.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy3 months ago

Interesting first story!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

You desperately need an editor or proof reader. Romance is about why people love each other. It’s not just about sexual attraction. This story is not a romance, because the characters never express love for each other, or why they do.

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