All Comments on 'Senior Year at Sommerville High Ch. 02'

fun stories. stick to Jake and his perspective, and let his communication with his friends tell their stories.

Jake seems to be led around. He really should give some pleasure instead of taking it all the time.

Truly enjoying Jake's adventures, the only thing I'm having trouble with is tracking the characters.

By tracking characters, do you mean during conversation or remembering who is who and what they look like

Quite a bit more enjoyable than high school