All Comments on 'Serena's Toy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Short and Sweet. Nice!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fun little read, thank you! Very exciting.

Paul4playPaul4playover 2 years ago

Excellent story!

Well written with a wonderful twist at the end.

And very erotic and arousing…….

ZdopZdopover 2 years ago

I was about to say, this read slightly different to your usual work but the twist at the end brought it back to normality. Another excellent story, I'm glad you are enjoying yourself and making new stories. However I must ask whether or not you ever plan on continuing your series Training Tom or sprout? I can fully understand firsthand getting burnt out and having it difficult finding inspiration to write more on a story that you have written so much of already. Totally normal. Whether its true or not, I'll still enjoy all your new work. They are always outstanding and enjoyable. Thanks!

LI KerwellLI Kerwellabout 2 years ago

What a great little twist in the end. Great story, as usual.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

i really like the story! the domination was good and i like the way you making Serena is basically more big than Josh. But... i feel so betrayed you put that pegging tag while this story didn't even have it at all, because i find this story by scrolling in pegging tag and this just makes me feel betrayed after all that tension building of Selena dominating Josh, all i get is the end and not a glimpse of pegging. Despite that, your story is good. Just please don't put a fake tag or crosscheck the tag you put again next time :(

CheeachaserCheeachaser10 months ago

So glad it was vanilla femdomme, so difficult to find.

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