All Comments on 'Serendipity'

Broken English make story dumb. Uncle raping niece no good.

"He banged away at her cunt. She flopped on the bed, delirious." Seriously? Is this honestly meant to be sexy?

To "sp9983"...

Can't satisfy everyone, you know....? I have to write the stuff that makes sense to me. I'm sure you'll find stories you like elsewhere on this site.

Dear 'Anonymous'...

You're free to write your own stories, with all the soft, sensitive, descriptive language that doesn't turn you off. As I wrote in my profile, I write the sex that happens with me, that my partners and I have enjoyed, talked about, what have you. Sex and sexual language is not one-size-fits-all.

JT