All Comments on 'Serving Emma Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loving it, next part please

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Premise with possibilities.

But barely a beginning.

The only one if the tags you listed was "chastity". Every other tag may happen n a subsequent chapter, bit not here. To bad.

Four stars for setup and potential.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The start of a beautiful relationship, I hope.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

oh yes please keep writing on this story, this could get real interesting real fast, hope she's in to dominating men..

slv4herslv4herover 1 year ago

Love where this is going. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Damn, love it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good start, looking forward to the next part!

Norway_1705Norway_1705about 1 year ago

5! Great! eight chapters are too few, and too short, the audience needs more chapters yet!

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