by soular
i read damn dress and this story is much better best story i read on literotica update on sonny and his girl plz loved
What was the point of putting sonny and the black girl in there? R u gonna do something with that or was that there just because? Please do something with. I think it would be really great!!!
that this story is at it's end, i've read it many a times tho' since months ago, u write so well and u draw me into the story with ease, i don't know what to now. :>
This is by far one of the BEST stories on this site. Oh, and VERY excited to read that there may be a follow-up to the Sienna/Brandon story. I love how you intregrated the two powerhouse men (Nic/Brendon) into this story.
So glad it all worked out for them. I love your stories, so intense! Can't wait to read the new ones. Great Job!
That was one of the best stories I have ever read. You are truly talented. Since I've been reading this story, I can't Nic Andretti out of my head. Sexy!
Nice plot, excellent writing skills could use little bit more sexy writing, like husband or BF having good sex with pregnant/lactating wife or GF. and little bit more sexy story lines with Navy seals and characters like BT & Nic in the story. Can't wait for your next Sexy story/stories. Please continue
Great story!! I loved it and im going to read it again. Keep the great stories comin b'coz im addicted to them.
**Luvvies**
THAT, was the bomb. I never thought I could love this story like your first, but I did. The things he said in Italian, were hot. It sounded moreromantic and heartwarming when he said them in Italian. I love Sienna, Brandon, Victoria, and Brandon. Loves You Soular.
loved it. i felt like i was reading a bool with a few good parts to play with myself ...... it wAs awesome love the whole mob thingg
could you make a Christmas and new year's special with nick and victoria? Please?!?!
Hi Soular,
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. I must say that Jimmy put in the mind of Bobby Baccalieri from the Sopranos...was he maybe the basis for Jimmy? Thanks for a good read!
When will the sequel starrring Sonny & his girl come out?
:p
You are a fucking amazing writer! Excuse my language, but your story was so good that I actually see the images and it felt like I was really there. Please continue to keep writing. To be honest your stories relax me and allow me to escape from my life.
This was a great story. I enjoyed every moment of it. As far fetched as the plot is the emotions in the story are real enough to make you glue your face to the computer. At the end when you mentioned "TangledinYou" bells started going off. Your both incredible freelance writers and you need to get your work published especially this story ASAP. Thank you for the excellent read.
I couldn't stop tear my eyes away from this story. It's that good. Please me know should you ever publish your work. I'll be first in line to buy it!
i loved it. i felt the character were well developed and the pace that their relationship grew was very believable :)
-twicharmed
I love the way you tell your stories, you make them come alive in my imagination.
Loved the characters and the set-up for Sonny. He's the kind of person you don't really like, but who somewhere keeps you interested. I''m looking forward to reading his story.
The best erotic story I've read. Thanks for a happy ending. You should be published! Can't wait for more.
From the beginning to end this story was amazing! Loved the background and sexy bits..keep writing these awesome tales. Plz!
I luv this story! I read it on fanfiction but then it wasn't there anymore and i read that it was copyrighted. I felt so bad. But then i read it here and gosh, was it amazing! from teh begining to the end! just great! i've been going crazy for this story! it was an amazing plot line and very well written. You should publish it fo real!!!
-sara
omg ii love this story so much it reminds me of my life..well kind of :)
you should keep writing more stories such as this one !
- Good Luck !
I took all weekend to read this story! One of the BEST I have ever read!!!! Loved the storyline, the characters, everything!! You are a wonderful writer!
this story was amazing! the way u described the emotion victoria went through while with nic made me cry with her and laugh with her and everything in between! i love the characters! ur a GREAT writer! keep it up! thanks!!
This is the 2nd time i've read this story, and i still cannot get over how AMAZING it is! You Frickin rock! Keep writing!
Rereading this story for the 2nd or 3rd time and it is still great...now bring on Gabriella!!
This was the 2nd time I read this story and it was just as good if not better than the first time I read it. I felt the the fear, the anger, the pain, love and every other emotion in between with Nic and Victoria. It was a great read.
I also read Damn Dress and let me say, WOW! You have a wonderful talent in envoking raw emotions that not only the characters feel but also the reader. I cried with Brandon and Sienna, with Jackson and felt the joy of them all with the birth of Brienna.
Thank you for sharing your stories with us all.
You are truly talented. This is hands down one of the greatest stories that Ive ever read! Amazing plot and story line and the character development was right on!. AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I absolutely LOVE Nic omgee lol
Like your other stories, I am so very pleased. I really loved this one as much as DAMN DRESS, and I didn't think that would be possible. It was great the way you brought your other characters (that I also liked) into this story.
You are so very talented. I look forward to reading more of Gabriella and your future work.
Take care and thank you for sharing.
I finished the story last week and came back today to write a small thank you. I love love loved this story you totally made me love Nic, it's not easy to turn an asshole into a loveable guy. Ok I know people have been asking but when can we expect Sonny's story????? lol
This story was ah-mazing....and I'm not saying that just to say that...I absolutely whole-heartedly loved every word in this story...so much so that I didn't even want to shut my computer down to sleep...I only hope that you continue to use your gift for writing because you definitely have the talent... I can't wait to get started on you're other stories :)
BEST LITEROTICA STORY EVER!!!!
It is 8am and I could not tear myself from you story.
I havent slept but it was SOOOO worth it!
OMG!
OMG!
OMG!
This was so incredible and just amazing. And they are such a cute couple. Perfection!!!! <33333333333333333333
This story is so awesome. I've spent the last 3 hours reading it all the way through. So well written, I was totally engrossed in this story
I loved this story and decided to read it again while waiting for the rest of Gabriella 8 & 9. You truly are a great writer!
I found this story this past Labor Day and you had me absolutely freaking hooked. This is by far the most amazingly well written story that I have read thus far on this site.
I found this story this past Labor Day and you had me absolutely freaking hooked. This is by far the most amazingly well written story that I have read thus far on this site.
Thanks....
Hearty congratulations for your multiple nominations in the 11th Annual Literotica Awards! Your nominations are in five categories this year:
Interracial Love- Seven Days
Sexiest Female- Victoria Davis in Seven Days
Sexiest Male- Nic Andretti in Seven Days
Most Literary/Genre Transcending- Seven Days
Most Influential Writer of 2009
I hope your many fans will take the time to vote for you in all five categories.
I'm very proud of you, soular, and just as I said last year, you'd win every award if it were up to me.
J
Loved it!! You are absolutely amazing. I seriously wanted to find myself my very own Nic and only from reading the first ch. :] Great Job. Im totally gonna read about Sonny...even though he's a bit of a jerk :] jerks need love too. lol
this is my umpteen time reading this story, and still i cry when nic hurts victoria but his harsh words, and still i sigh, wanting so much to be victoria lol.
One of the best stories I have ever read. Looking forward to the next series. Great work.
Hearty congratulations for your wins in the 11th Annual Literotica Awards for this chapter of Seven Days, as well as your wins for chapter seven and your win as most influential author of 2009. All five of your wins were very much deserved, in my opinion, and I'm extremely proud of you. It's good to see your exceptional talent rewarded.
J
Nic definitely goes into the logs of hottest fictional characters. You did a fantastic job with Him and I can see myself wanting my own mob boss:) Great story, loved it. Now I need to repay a sleep debt........
I just read this story in a few days and it was off the chain.
You are an excellent writer.
Thanks
Moni
I have read this story a few times now and it gets better everytime. I have also read Damn dress and I love it as well. Keep up the good work!! I look forward to reading more of your submissions.
I've only just discovered this website but I loved this story and read it in about two and a half days, got to love the Blackberry. Nic is soo scary but very sexy ;-)
Looking forward to reading more
X
I enjoyed this story so much! I just couldn't put it down!!! I was up for the past few nights reading it because I so badly wanted to know what was going to happen next. I felt like I was on a emotional roller coaster along w/ the characters. I really HATED Nic for a while, but ended up liking him in the end. I wish that this story didn't have to end because I liked it that much. It was written so well. I will definitely be reading more stories from you!
OMG i am so in love with this story! It took me about four hours to finish the story but every minute was well spent. I seriously can't remember another story that I've enjoyed as much as this one. This is definitely one of my fav stories EVER, and not only on this website.
Nic was just the perfect character in my opinion. I loved how masculine and domineering he was, but i loved that he would change just because of Victoria. I'm all for interracial couples, but i've never thought about italians that way until now LOL. I almost feel like jumping all the italians i meet or moving to Italy or something lol
Anyway... GREAT job with this story. I'm about to check out if any of your others stories are as good as this one :)
I just read the entire thing, you are responsible for my sleep depravación and red eyes lol. I loved this story and will have to read the rest of your story's in the near future. I hope you don't stop writing and you continue to bless the world with your specular story's.
Your Fan,
Sebastian Felt
P.S. My email is S.felt@ymail.com
I accidently press 2 this story was 5 easily.
Fantastic so well written. THe best story I ever read would make a fantastic movie.
This story was amazing! It made me laugh, cry and truly made me love Nic(lol). I could not stop reading till I finished. I love the chemistry between the characters. Your writing is amazing and I can't wait to check out your other work! I love stories like this. Please keep up your good work
I love how you brought Jackson, Brandon, and Sienna into this. I was so happy!! You truly are an amazing writer and this story was so emotional to me. I was happy, then crying my eyes out, then mad, then laughing to tears! Can't wait to read that next story of yours. So glad I crossed paths with Damn Dress.
- Addicted
I LOVED this story!!! I wish it could have never ended...ever lol! Being a black woman married to an Italian man I have to say everything was perfect except for Nic's mother...I wish my mil was as receptive as his was. This story led me to read That Damn Dress, I iked this one better. The age gap kept me from really getting into it but it was still an amazing story and I cant wait to sart your next story! Love your writing, keep it up!!
I remember reading Damn Dress, and wholy shit that was just amazing.
I stayed up for a very long time reading this story and it was nearly just as good! I nearly shit my pants wheneve Jackon came into the story!!!
Thanks for entertaining me :)
I'll buy all your books!
-Rogue
And I think it would be fantastic to read a story involving Sonny and the woman who saw him trying to hide the dead Russian. Maybe a story about him growing up and being a better person.
Please Soular write this story
I must say that this story was very well thought out. Being able to follow the story from the beginning until the end was an amazing feat. I loved the many emotions that were displayed throughout the story. Keep up the good writing :>)
This is one of the best story i have ever read, i really wanted more but all good thing have to end. So thank you, and please post the story with sonny and the mystery women i know u will make it very interesting. Thanks again, i am anxiously awaiting your post.
This story is amazing! It's the only way to describe it. I hope you keep writing!!
Belongs on the soft core section in the book store. Guess the author needed a hook to hang her story on so she chose an inter-racial one. Any resemblance between how a cocoa colored woman associated with a 'made' member let alone being married to on is stretched beyond belief. She would never be accepted no matter how beautiful or smart. There's no hint of intolerance or racism in the story therefore it totally lacks credulity.
Goombah
For the story to be within the realm of possibility, the only person who necessarily had to accept Victoria was Nic. He resisted giving in to that acceptance for as long as he could. He didn't fall easily, at all. 'Made' or not, in the end he gave everything up for her, purely out of love. Perhaps that does make for an unlikely story, but maybe that's what makes it so special, if you really think about it.
still one of my favorites stories out there... every couple months or so I always end up coming back to this story...reading it again and falling in love with it all over again... cant go wrong (my opinion)
keep up the great work & I hope to see these characters pop in on another story of yours VERY soon!!! :)
just finished reading this story for the 5th time and I was wondering.......will Nic make it as an architect? Personally I think that was the only unrealistic part of the story.
I think that you are to the interracial genre what Elianna is to the vampire genre.You guys rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What about his brother? He should definitely get a story. But I loved it!I whooped when Nic was let out of jail and almost cried when he threw that cot after he found out he missed his son't birth. Awesome awesome awesome..
I love all of your stories, but I want to know if you will submit the story about Sonny
you are definitely an AH-MAZING writer, i believe you should have this publish into some short story or something! this has been my absolute favorite series to read! please, PLEASE, never stop writing!
I FREAKIN LOVED THIS STORY IT WAS AMAZING I HAD ROMANCE SADNESS AND COMEDY A IN ONE STORY I LOVED IT SO MUCH MY SISTER IS READING THE STORY NOW AND SHE LOVE IT TOO SHE IS HOOKED OMG I LOVED IT
Enjoyed the plot line and the details, well written. You kept me coming back for more. Keep up th good work. Now explore Sonny and Paul.
You are an incredibly talented author, the way you pieced this story together sucks the reader in instantly and doesn't let go until you've finished the entire series. In only 7 pages you manage to weave something whole, believable (to a point, after all this is fiction lol), sexy, and romantic. Fantastic storyteller!
you are without a doubt the best writer i has seen onn this, the way you turned the hate relationship onto love is amazing and the twist and turns along the way were the best. i also love how you put in the characters from Dawn Dress in there:D love it love it love it.
please keep writing your stories are amazing
this was a really great story and no mattter what happens in life can all ways turn bad thing in to goo. god never gives up more that we can handle just as this story statesand the story damn dress is one of me favorite stories to
I've read the whole story about a million times! Haha, I just love it so much. So much power beyond the words <3 You can tell they love each other (:
Anyway, your writing is fantastic! ♥ Magnificent !
There were moments where i wanted to reach through the screen and strangle you for what you did to Nic and Victoria.
I cired and i laughed, this is a masterpiece.
And i got the happy ending i wanted! : D
Thank you so much for this.
This story changed my perspective on interracial relationships.....thank you!!!
P.s: I love how Nic can be so aggressive!!!
I noticed the names Jackson & Sienna-- could that be from th story Damn Dress? hmmm Im gunna go see
I loved it. I especially loved the fact that it's a black woman and white (or Italian) man. Since that is what my husband and I are. He did take my laptop away only because it was three in the morning. You are a wonderful writer and I'm glad there is a sonny story lol. Hope you start another series soon.
still love this story.. no matter HOW many times I read it.. and Damn Dress! Pleasee hurry and bring these characters back :)
I personally would love for u to continue... maybe with Sebastian, Brienna, and Michael (Tasha's son) all grown up maybe in some sort of love triangle? Also a continuation including Sonny and "the young black woman"? Either way looking forward to whatever you decide to wow us with next. Great read.
I WOULD LIKE FOR YOU TO WRITE MORE STORIES YOUR SERIES SEVEN DAYS AND DAMN DRESS: A LOVE STORY WAS AMAZING!! ANYTHING ELSE LIKE THAT WOULD BE OUT OF THIS WORLD!!
THANKS!!!
Absolutely amazing writing!!! Not only should this be filled out into a novel, it should be scripted for a movie!!! This is definitely a favorite of mine. Wow!! Keep up the excellent writing.
I just love your stories. I have falling in love, I have cried and I have mourned and I am overjoyed for the characters in your stories. I have read them all. Beautifully refreshing. PLEASE PLEASE keep them coming.
You are so wonderful....
Its not all lovey dovey like most erotic stories....It's so real....I mean there is love but also hard times..thts jus real
Great writing...PS..lol...I need more...i wanna kno mre!
plz continue those chapters..with both stories...Seven Days and Damn Dress! love u and your writing..Bless u darling!
You deserve to become a novelist. This story was absolutely beautiful and I want more...
Doll-
Such a nice smooth tale. I will definitely read more of your products. You do a great job with the small details of subtle interaction between the characters.
An excellent tale ruined (for me) by the women's-magazine type sentimentality towards the end.
You are an amazing writer. This is the best story I have ever read on this site. Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift with us. Please keep writing.
I ended reading this till 5 in the morning. This story deserve 5 stars and certainly the best i have read here.