All Comments on 'Seven Days Ch. 10'

I haven't even read trhu yet, but I've been clicking refresh all evening, so I'm just glad to have made it on first. Will post a real review after I inhale the story!

What can we tell you that you do not already know. You have an amazing talent and I am sure all of the readers are hoping you will continue to share it with us!!

Really loved the fact that you tied Damn Dress and Seven Days together. Pure genious!!!

This story is FREAKING AWESOME..... I love your writing.........I hit refresh all day waiting for it to post!!!!!!

ok first of I LOVE IT!!!!!! secondly, I liked how you intertwined Brandon and Sienna's story in there. Third thank you so much for letting them live happily ever after.

another great story can't wait for the others.

Soular, I just love your writing. This was the perfect ending. I can't waitl until you publish, and will be the first to buy your novel. Keep up the good work. I think you have a very special gift...Jan

Loved it! Loved reading about Brienna too. Just like the previous post, been refreshing all day waiting for this. Great conclusion to this love story. You really took me into another world with this story. =) RR

Girl, you work it out all the time, You do no wrong! Your sotries are perfect from start to finish all the time. I really dont think that there is anyone on here that can touch your stories, you pull everyone in to the stories and keep them there and we all start trippen when we dont have an up date lol but damnit keep doing your thing and I cant wait for these to come out in paper back! You've got a fan for life!!! :)

I loved the whole bad boy gone good bit... It'll always be my favourite plot. You are a great storyteller and I teared up when Victoria cried because of her helplessness in helping Nic who was in prison. Though there is one problem in page 5. Amber was talking abt putting some girls in place but you wrote Victoria instead. no biggie. this will remain one of my favourite stories. Thanks for sharing!!! Good luck with publishing!

Soular, you put your foot it in, you did your thang girl!!!! I hate to see it end but as they say all good things must come to an end...I knew you would not disappoint...I will definitely be looking out for the follow up stories...

Whew! I held my breath for a hot minute there. CHANGE...Many crave it, some embrace it, few successfully achieve true happness and enlighenment through change. You beautifully captured Nic, and even Victoria's struggle to change. Kudos on the gentle revisit to the original Seven Days from both of their perspectives. This was truly a well-earned happy ending. I'll miss this story and these characters but will paiently wait for your next masterpiece.

Bluegardenia

You made me tear up! I'm glad everything turned out happily ever after for them. Now I need to find myself a man like Nic...

is AMAZING!!! You are such a fabulous writer!!!

OMG!!! Why would the story be over?!?!?!? I really think I am about to cry. I just love your stories so much, they could go on forever and ever and I just wouldn't care. You could make your stories into a soap opera where everyone dies a thousand times over and people just would never stop reading. So another amazing love story from you ends and I don't know what I'm going to do with my life. Looks like I'm just going to have to wait for your amazing published works and more stories from you on here. I just want to thank you for giving me something to look forward to all the time and for blessing us with your writing. Can't wait for more from you! :D

♥ ZMS, LIFELONG FAN ♥

P.S. If you just so happen to find a man anywhere resembling Nic...Hook this up....LOL :)

That was brilliant on so many levels, Soular! SO many. First off, that ending was brilliant for Nic and Vic, but you just set up SOnny's story!!!! I know you did! Wow! Brilliance!

A great ending. These stories will be picked up and published so quickly so thank you for sharing them on this site for free first. Can't wait to read more.

I loved this story and the "Damned Dress". I look forward to any story you write. They have all been really interesting, funny, and just plain well-written.

And I would love to purchase any book you publish, so I will be checking.

NuFreespirit

That was wonderful. Not much else to say except thanks for writing!

I've said it before and I'll say it again! You are the shit girl!! And slipping that little intertwine of the stories in there was STUPENDOUS!! Just when we thought it was safe to give our emotions a rest you just BLAM BAH BAM us with this severe emotion bomb! I am emotionally exhausted and I'm going to bed. You know me if you wait too long for the next story I will send out the blood hounds along with the APB. Oh! This was so worth the wait!!:-)

That was such a lovely ending to an already brilliant story. I love your writing and your style; your stories inspire and provoke and hopefully one day I'll be able to write something half as brilliant as this. I'm so glad everything worked out between Nic and Vic and as always I'm looking forward to more great stuff from you! xxx

You are my absolute favorite writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please give us more of your stories, soooooooooooon!

It's over! I'm about to cry now. ;(

I love these two. God knows how hard they've gone through. It's a masterpiece from the beginning. I'm speechles. Standing ovation for u, Soular!! U gave us such wonderful stories. I look forward to see the next. Hopefully u don't forget us, your loyal fan base here. Congratulations for u to get this story being published but please...please keep us posted here.

I'll give u double kisses for that...muach...muach. ;p

Thank u very very much, lady!

Blessed u. ;)

Forever fan

~Selly

Soular, once again you have written a story that really delivers. I absolutely love this couple!! I love how devoted they are to each other. I must admit, at the beginning of this story I didn't know if I would like it...BUT you blew me away with charachter development and your ability to tell a story. I love how Amber got what was coming to her and Jimmy's psychic abililties to know of Marsh's future misfortune. I was thrilled when you included my other favorite couple in a cameo appearance Brandon and Sienna and Jackson in a small role. I feel sorry for Paul and wonder about Sonny. I love Mama Andretti. I really love how you protray Nic as a loving Dad. There is nothing more sexy, to me at least, than a father lying with his baby on his chest. I get tingly! I am so looking forward to your future work ...And count me as one of those who is queing up waiting for you to publish. THANK YOU for sharing your storie!!!!!

WOW. This is the best story i have read on here. I'm almost sad to know that this is the end for them. Very entertaining and kept me coming back for me. Great job!!!

I have loved the story from the start and to the finish. I am glad with the way that you ended the story. I wonder if you write will write more stories about the other characters in this story or not. Thank you for great story.

I don't know where to start! Amber....hmph she's lucky waking up in the morgue is all she got and Marsh have mercy that man is obsessed. Sonny, now that little prick once he's found out needs to be taken to Paul's torture chamber (if he has one) and needs to have the stupidity and cockiness beaten out of him for making Paul go through that nonsense. And this new woman that Sony has 'met' I hope takes him down a size and makes him GROW UP! Now lastly, Nic and Vic...too cute for words, I love how you brought this family together along with the Sienna/Brandon/Jackson crew. And is it just me or does Nic seem to be obsessed with having little boys, I can see if a girl does pop in the scenario he's going to be thrown for some loops with the protectiveness. Awesome, Awesome, Awesome!

Amazing,goodness am speechless. this was a very beautiful story and an excellent finish. U are a very good writer.

I can't believe Sonny faked his own death and got away with it. The little weazel ain't so bright. Now, Pauly going to be caught up in his shit. I can't help wondering if Sonny going to get his own story.

As for Nic and Victoria, they deserve their own happy ending. However, I would like to see Marsh get his. Because of his action Nic was denied the right to be there for his son's birth. I also resent him following Victoria like she was criminal. I also took umbrage to him refering to her as a slut. I'm sure this is not the end for Nic. I belived him when he said he was going to kill Marsh.

Soular,

What an awesome ending to an already wonderful story! Good luck with the publishing:) Keep us posted, I would most definitely purchase your work. You are truly a gifted and talented writer. I've read other stories in this genre and a lot of the other authors on here don't even compare. There are some talented writers don't get me wrong, but you are by far my favorite. You have the ability to draw the reader in like no other. Your stories aren't just about sex. You are able to create a well rounded plot, actually develop your characters to the point where we actually love or hate them lol.

I look forward to your future work and I wish you much success. Good luck with everything!

Lateesha

You are an amazing writer and thank you for sharing your work with all of us. when i read the part about jackson knocking on the door and etc. i had to stop and be like uh wait second . i thought it was cool how you added him and his family in to it. NOW sonnys story i just can't wait to read that one, i want to see what type of woman you have in mind to bring him to his knees. i will be on the edge of my seat waiting for the frist chapter of whatever is up next for you.

Beautiful ending to an awesome story. Damn Dress has a sequel Sonny is going to get his own story, it only gets better. I am so looking forward to anything you plan to publish.

WCD

Very good. Fan from the beginning. One error to point out, you put Victorias name in where Amber's should be while she is in her apartment and ranting about ratting out her ex-husband. Good ending.

Thank you

Oh, what a way to end a story...everything is as it should be. LOL. Nic and Victoria together, overcoming many obstacles with their love still intact. And mentioning Jackson, Sienna and Brandon was fabulous. Also, Sonny - should be interesting. Loved, loved, loved this story, Soular! SZ

Beautiful closing chapter, and an overall wonderful story.

-- KK in Texas

As always I had to keep a box of tissues hand while reading this. Your work is always brilliant and poignant, with incredible characters and inventive plots. Thanks for giving me another story to adore.

You have thanked everyone else for their comments and support, but I would like to thank you for this amazing story. You truly have a gift, and I am so glad that you have shared it with us. You know how to captivate an audience at first glance, and keep them coming back for more. This is a wonderfully beautiful story. Once again thank you and congratulations on a job well done!

So is your next story the saga of Sonny and his new found friend.

A wonderful conclusion, Soular. I loved how you managed to bring some of the characters from Damn Dress into this story. Fantastic writing. I look forward to more from you.

...to a brilliant story. You did it again. Thanx for all the superb stories you bring us. Cant wait to see what Sonny and his little captive will bring to our doorsteps. Good move to bring in the Damn Dress characters. What a lovely surprise!:-) Good luck with your future endeavours deary! Cat

Soular, I just wanted to thank you for another excellent story. The perfect ending for Nic and Victoria and baby Sabastian. I will definitely miss them. Can't wait to see what you have in store for Sonny and his new friend or hostage or whatever she turns out to be, I know it will be great. Good luck to you and whatever project you have in store.

that was an absolutely perfect ending to a perfect story. well done soular! it also made me smile a wee bit more at the house party where all my favorite characters were brought together.

I cannot wait until you are published. Your writing is gifted beyond words.

OMG. I dont know if you're stories can get any better!! I'm addicted on a completely un-healthy level! Keep up the good work!! Loveeddd the tie in of your two stories by the way!!

Omg. I am so saddened that Brandon and Sienna aren't coming back..and now Victoria & Nic aren't either. Maybe Brienna and Sebastian deserve their own love story? LOL.

Great ending with a twist for Sonny. Was also wondering if Mama and Jackson might find each other!!! Of course I am still waiting for Sienna's best friend and John's story! So many possibilities and you do such a good job of putting them all together. Thanks once Again. Sher

You never cease to amaze me with your wonderful stories...i can't wait to read more stories from you...waiting with bated breath :)

And I thought Damn Dress was the f*cking bomb but wonders never cease. 7 Days was a complete page turner from beginning to end (just like Damn Dress) and I completely LOVE the way Nic LOVED Victoria! Oh Sonny...what in the hell has he gotten himself into? Bring it SOULAR!!!!

What a journey you've taken these characters and us readers on! Seeing familiar characters woven into the finale made it all the sweeter. <p>I'm thrilled you took my suggestion and it already looks like it's going over very well--told ya! (evil grin) Can't wait to find out what you've got up your sleeve for Sonny.</p>

All the best to you with publication.

<p>August</p>

You are absolutely, the best writer on this sight. I can't wait to see what you will do wit Sonny. Also, I really wish you would add to ur favorites cause I would love to see some of your favorite stories and authors.

I LOVED THIS STORY!!! I don't know how many times I've cried,laughed,and said 'No you di'nt', and Yes you di'id'. I LOVED IT!!!!

for writing THE BEST story on this site. I can't believe my luck for finding Seven Days. I really loved the ending and I'm thrilled that they got their happy ever after. I'm gonna miss Nic & Vic! You are an amazing writer and I cannot wait to read more from you.

Wonderful job soular! And it was a nice surprise to read about Sienna and Brandon. I love your writing and look forward to your next story!

There's not much more to say than that! Its so absolutely fantastic the whole series is damn near perfection! I loved it all. Thanks for sharing your talent with us all.

for a well crafted and thoroughly enjoyable read. All the best with your future works

i swear when i saw the final installment of this fantastic story was upmy heart skipped a beat. soular i feel so connected to this story it's unbelievable. im so happy everything worked out for vic and nic lol. can't wait for the sonny story too. from your now die-hard fan lol.

I loved following your story and following the characters' development from beginning to end.

I can't wait until you come out with Sonny's story. You've left me with quite an opinion of him and I wonder if your followup will make him into a more sympathetic character like Nic became.

And I have to admit when you brought in Cdr Branson and his son, I was expecting some action in LA. But you fooled me. Good to see Marsh get his after what happened in the last chapter.

Once again, bravo! I can't wait for your next submissions :)

This was an absolutely fantastic story. I'm so glad Nic and Victoria had a happy ending. Great characters. They're right up there with Brandon & Sienna.

Soular,once again you delivered an outstanding chapter to an absolutely amazing story. I have become so enmeshed into Nic and Vic's story. I have you bookmarked waiting for new chapters. (lol) I am very glad that Victoria and NIc were able to transition into a new life together. I absolutely adore the exchange they had when it came to answering Sebastian's cry. You have portrayed their characters and all your characters with true emotion. I absolutely love how you brought in my other favorite characters from Damn Dress. I've been missing Sienna and Brandon, as well as Jackson. That was definitely a surprise. I am looking forward to your new stories. count me as one of those waiting for your published stories. Thanks again for sharing your stories.

Round of applause to you soular for this amazimg story!I've read all your other stories and I'm completely blown away. You have an amazing gift and thank you for sharing that with us. I hope your publication goes as smoothly as possible so others can enjoy your talent as much as we have.

BRAVO!!

Amazing!! Bravo! A well written, enjoyable unconventional love story. Bravo :)

This was so good. What a great surprise to see characters from a previous story. I really loved it. Keeping doing it, you're really good.

Dear girl, once again you deliver beyond expectations!I will be on the lookout for anything you publish.You are a wonderful talended writer with a bright future right in front of you! Congatulatiosns.xoxo.

What can i say love it love it, you are a great writer and i look forward to your follow up of Damn dress and the story of Sonny. I hope you publish a book real soon, you are really good at writing. I love the ending of Seven days and miss Nic and Vicky already.....

I love you. That's really all I can say.

Great final chapter to a beautifully conceived and executed story.

I LOVED IT!! i read this story about 5 times and I never get tired of reading it. PLEASE, PLEASE write another soon or whatever because u r sooo good at writing

Soular! I just sat at work and read this entire story. I did not get anything done today, but it's okay. You need to be on the shelves girl. You got a talent that is so amazing. This is the best story I have read on this site. Cant wait for another hot one from you! Thank you for the read.

im sad that the story is over, but satisfied with the ending!it was amazing!can't wait to read your next story =]

Soular, thank you for the lovely story, I look forward to future installments and will endeavor to keep a look out on your bio.

Good luck with the publishing. You work is awesome!

Jusomata.

Listen, this is my first comment ever on Literotica. You have actually forced me to say this "wow", "thank you". Sniff. You made my day. I can't believe I spent all day reading your story. If I were a publisher, I would offer you a contract now.

I LOVE your stories, I haven't commented in a while though i will be honest, but i have read every single chapter of both of your wonderful stories. your are a magnificent writer, keep up the good work. I look forward to your future work and achievements.....

*a-town*

Love this story. You are very gifted and I thank you for sharing it.I would buy anything with your name on it.

I've spent the last 2 days reading both Damn Dress and Seven days. I loved them. I think Damn Dress is my favorite but both were terrific! Great story telling!!! Keep it up!

he seduced his way into my mind...just like he did with victoria.

this is excellently written (with some very minor spelling edits. e.g. "drug" should be "dragged"): the pacing, plot, characterisations, dialogue...all superlative. you even had me in tears at certain points in the story. ah sigh...

hope to read another great story of yours soon.

p.s. i read a little of 'damn dress' but i think 'seven days' has the edge, a dangerous, roguish, nic-edge! lol

I didnt expected you to involve the damn dress characters to this story.anyway it was fantastic. I think you have a thing for irish and italian men.

i vote for someone who looks like Brit actor, Richard Armitage. he fits the physical requirements i.e. tall (6ft 2in), blue-eyed, lean + muscular, with a deep, husky voice. here's a sample of his...erm...delectability:

- http://mulubinba.typepad.com/.a/6a00d8341dd88553ef00e553aaeed68833-320wi

- http://media.photobucket.com/image/richard%20armitage%20north%20and%20south/MsBonou2/Richard%20Armitage/Richard_Armitage_in_whitemyspace-1.jpg

- http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f271/_Bones/RARedOct20071.jpg

although i'm not sure if R.A. can do an Italian-American accent, and he might be on the wrong side of 30.

still, whilst reading 'Seven Days', it was Richard as Nic that I'd been imagining.

is there any actor out there who'd be perfect?

I could not stop reading, that was one of the best stories I have ever read. Please write a book, you are very talented.

You told your story beautifully, soular. I had the pleasure of seeing you create this tale of true love from start to finish, and I'm still slightly in awe of the mesmerizing skill with which you successfully accomplished every goal you set for yourself. You took Victoria and Nic on an incredibly challenging journey from an unlikely and unpromising start to an immensely satisfying and memorable conclusion. Your readers got to go along for the ride. Congratulations on a job well done. Love. JG

This was so good. I can't believe it's over!!! You are a fantastic writer and I would love to read more from you.

I bow to your greatness. I enjoy every word every moment every sizzling sex scene. This story rocks! I love how you build up the drama the intrique and the suspence. Soular you are amazing awesome brilliant talent writer. You got skills girl don't give it up. I am a fan for life at least until you quite(I hope it is never). I cannot wait for your next story. I can't wait until you post Sonny story. I hope he made it. Please when you write Sonny story. Could you please send a love interest for Paul. I feel for him (older woman 40 or over). GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh my god, your writing is absolutely fantastic. I love your stories, they grab my attention so much that ive read both in a matter of hours. You seriously need to write a book, because you are one of my new favorite authors.

PURE GENIUS!!!

Talent such as yours is a rare gem and a wonderful steal. I've been completely bowled over by your amazing stories and captivating characters.

Charming, just charming!

PURE GENIUS!!!

Talent such as yours is a rare gem and a wonderful steal. I've been completely bowled over by your amazing stories and captivating characters.

Charming, just charming!

Ok so I love both Damn Dress and Seven Days. Nic and Brandon are so fucking sexy and have been invading my sexual fantasies for a while now. So I was wondering who do you guys think would win a fight between Nic and Brandon? I can't help but wonder each time I read these stories.

i just thought that it was so realistic, spellbinding and HOT. seriously dude you should write a book. it would fly off the shelves.

awww the stories over. :*( i REALLY enjoyed it. i can't decide which story is better their both equally awesome.

this story has stayed with me since i read it about 2 months ago, to the point i have verbally told this story, (minus the graphic discriptions of the bedroom scenes ;)) to family and friends and everyone of them agree with me that this story should be on the big screen, if so pls pls pls find the actors to suit ur characters :0

I talked about this with my girlfriend and she was begging me to forward her the link. You are a master story teller. I hope you do publish your works. Great job. Now I need to read your other works. Don't stop writting. I love what you do. Keep up the good work.

I read this book after reading "Damn Dress", wich I loved so much. I have to say that this is even better. The way you wrote the changes to Nic were done so seemlessly that his change seem natural. Even when he had regrets about things he said and did to Victoria, he was still human enough not the voice them all right away. From the start of chapter one until the end of chapter ten his character kept me reading this book. I like that you made Victoria stronger as the book progressed, but you also kept that decent spirit and honest confusion about things people did and said that she would never think of doing. I look forward to seeing more submissions from you. If not here then when you are published somewhere else. You have a true talent for telling and story and ...............you can steam up a page when you want to.

that's what seven days did to me, i'm in love with nic and victoria, cried with her, got angry at nic with her, and stood defiant with her lol, this story, absolutely, most definately, assuredly, hands down should win the next writers contest, you got my vote!!

Probably the best story I have read at Literotica.

Would make a great movie!

What a well written, beautiful story. This should have been a book. Ok, no. If it was a book, it wasn't going to be free. But I would definitely pay money to read this.

What stood out the most was I could see this being a novel that could be turn into a movie..Enjoyed it thoroughly

this should have been a book, i would buy it. i've read this 4times and i laugh and cry every single time. its wonderful and thank you.

I LOVED this story! It's like a novel that I was addicted to and couldn't stop reading over the weeked. I would seriously buy it. kudos!

Hmmm...........

I really dont want this story to end. I am really upse that its over, finished this story over 2 nights that went in to the morning.

I don't know why I love this story a bit more than your first. Maybe it's because of Nick who I just fell in love with. He was the bad guy and the love he felt for Vic turned him upside down I loved to see that change in him, from when she became more than just his whore to becoming his woman.

From chapter 1 to 10 I was hooked. I couldn't stop reading, even when I did finally stop, 10 minutes later I was reading the next chapter.

You are one impressive author, you go beyond erotic fiction, this was romance in its purest forms. Giving it 100/5.

what happens to sonny???

I just loved this story from beginning to end. I loved Victoria and Nic they make a wonderful couple and I am happy that she was strong and kind enough to change Nic and he was strong enough to let her change him.

Like others I wanted to know what happened to Sonny too but from you last words it seems as though you have something in store for us with him though I did not care for Sonny that much I look forward to seeing what you have for us.

Great story and you have definitely been added to my favorite authors list.

I just wanted to say I loved this story!! I stayed up until 1am to finish it ( well worth being sleepy at work) you have to write more like this. you are an amazing writer Soular. I really enjoyed your work.

I just loved this sequel . I m ur big fan for sure . U definately need to publish. Its awesome . Even damn dress sequel s superb. All da best .