by soular
Despite where it is posted, this is not just a story of sex. It is a magnificent story of two people finding love. And that belongs in some place or form other than this site. I enjoyed this story from start to finish. My only regret is that there isn't more to this wonderful story to enjoy.
I read all your stories in the span of a few hours because they were THAT GOOD. Please, please come back to Literotica. As a budding amateur writer, I understand the difficulty of coming back and focusing on an old story but please…this is so good! Your dedication and skills have tremendously impacted me to begin writing again.
From one writer to another - your work, on this site, is without equal. You manage to perfectly depict a relationship, with all of its peaks and valleys, into two wonderful stories. In a world with fictions like "Fifty Shades of Gray", works that generally exist by asserting a misogynistic male control, yours manages to titillate and push boundaries not often seen in print work. It's hot, without being contrived; sweet, without being sentimental; feminist, without being misandrist or without decrying your lead character's femininity. Furthermore, this is not often seen with black female leads - a female character who is unapologetically and unambiguously black, but her blackness is not the only trait about her. what matters most of all is that Victoria is beautiful and has the same flaws and realisms as any other character, and is defined by neither stereotype nor archetype. Her strengths are readily apparent (her devotion) as are her weaknesses (her impulsivity - and my only complaint is that this is something that I see quite a bit in Sienna, as well). The men tend to be similar in personality - I can see quite a bit of Brandon in Nicolas and vice-versa, but for the most part, they still manage to be quite distinct in character.
Soular, your work is easily worthy of a publisher, and I would question why you haven't quite gone through a publisher yet or taken part in writing marathons like National Novel Writing Month - but then I realize that to try to crank out a product so quickly and so methodically would cheapen the work and the delicate care that you take in your final product.
As a black woman, for this work, I thank you. As a writer, I urge you to push on and continue with your chronicles. You have a gift on your hands.
Loved seven days and damn dress! Hated for them to end!!! A freaking great read. Please continue on with tbese! Wow!!!
I love this story and sad to see it end. Brought me almost close to tears while also causing me to laugh and smile endlessly. Great story!
I loved reading your stories. Ever think of writing books? You would do great.
Cant wait to read about Sonny
It was great to see Jackson pop up. Maybe he and Mariana could get together
I'm just crazy about your story! I've been wishing someone would do something like this and you have done it. You're incredible you should make a pt. 2 please? You have done an outstanding job and you have talent!
I found this through tumblr, waiting on edge for each part; quickly I saw a source and followed reading it fully up to now. All I can say is you inspire me so much as a writer, this was such an amazing work that brought me joy and tears!
Cannot wait to read more of your works !
I thought this was a great story. I actually started reading it on someones tumblr page that is reposting it. I got tired of waiting for each chapter to be posted and searched out entire story and found you. I converted text to epub so I could read on my phone. I finished story yesterday and came back to tell you great story only to realize that you wrote this years ago. I hope you have been published since then, you certainly deserve to be.
This was a really good story! I wish it were true (especially for myself) but it's not. Hey... a girl can always dream right??!!
This is the third time I have read this story and every time is just brand new. I laugh and cry and get angry and feel the love emitted from the characters. Every time I am just so drawn in. Your writing is truly something special and one of the main reasons I joined this site. Please continue to be the lovely artist that you are.
Honestly started reading chapter 6 first who does that right? Than I started in the beginning and than I read the whole thing again .. Stay with me, I've read it 3x you are a genius.. Thank u for sharing your vision with us.
I absolutely love your writing. Please give us a follow up on Sonny's mystery woman and finish your other story as well. Again, you are absolutely amazing!
Another roller coaster ride of a story, equally as good as your first. I don't know which I like better. This story and Damn Dress are two of the best on Literotica, in my opinion. And I don't mean just in the Interracial Love category.
Five stars, needless to say.
This story made me cry so many times. It was great and the people from damn dress where in it which is a plus.
And I would just like to say, great story! But I had an idea for a follow up story. Not that I'm even sure you're still writing but. What about a story for Sebastian and Brienna! I mean they'd be the same age; from to competely different families. And I think perfect for each other!! I would love to read that spin!
I would love to hear about Sonny and the young black woman that he ran across.
I reread every so often, wow gets me every time. I wouldn't mind a story on Sonny and the mystery black woman and even Jackson too.
I absolutely fell in love with this story and the characters! It is so amazing and I can't wait to read Sonny's story. I hope he will change into a better man because of a good woman!
I have read this story about 7 times and it gets better every time I read it . But I gotta say that you are veeeeeeeeèeeeerrrrŕyyyyyy frikken , very very talented and I enjoy reading your work. Don't ever stop writing.
XOXO
Kyrlanna
Pleeassseee make an epilogue of some sort about Nic and Victoria! Doesn't have to be another series or heck even 2 pages I just need something!
I've read this story 4 times and I just realized that Jackson and his family are from Damn Dress lol, I feel so stupid for not noticing that before. I love when authors connect all their stories, keep writing soular you have a gift!
Soular someone stole your story on a site called wattpad entitling it Delunca... She is registered under Delima_.. Her premise is exactly the sam as yours and is pathetically hidden by different names.. I left a comment at the end of the chapter entitled "next chapter preview" under the name miristina...THIS IS URGENT
I love this story and the love Nic and Victoria have developed for each other. It would be good to get an epilogue between these two. I guess I'm like everyone, just not quiet ready to let them go.
I love this story... But what happened with sonny ?? Please write about him
SOULAR, I hope you know just how talented you are. This is by the far the best erotic story I've ever read in my life!!! Nick is my dream guy!!! What an amazing story.. I will never get over this!!! Thank you so much for sharing. Please never stop writing!!! Xx
Goodness, this is just such an excellent story, if you ever publish it or anything else know I'm waiting to give you my money
I never really comment on Literotica's stories, but damn this is a good story. Am sorry that it's over, even though i thought i wouldn't finish reading it, since Nic was such an asshole at the beginning of the story. To the author kudos to you.
I loved your book I don't usually find books that has the perfect balance between the story line and erotica but by far your's was the best I came over please keep on writing you have amazing skill.
I thought I loved damn dress u till I read 7 days!!! Incredible character development!!!! You are sooooooo talented. This story lacked NOTHING.
Apparently it is just me, so I have to say it. I came here for an interracial sex story and not some Italian-Russian mob wars!
I'll definitely reserve a copy of, "Seven Days," on Amazon if I can! There are so many wonderful stories on this site, but this one is still my favorite. Please keep writing, you are an amazing talent!
This story was beyond amazing. I found myself on a rollercoaster following along with this couple. It was far from cliché and felt so real. Definitely consider putting this on press. I'd love a copy for my personal Library ☺
Nevermind the negative posts, you wrote a very good story. It would have been great even without the sexy bits.
Please keep writing.
Maybe a follow up about the Marcones.
I read all 10 chapters in a day and I loved them all, this story was beautiful!!!
Of Jackson, Sienna and Brandon I'm new here a friend sent me a link to your stories and I'm so glad she did, I love your stories your SOOO talented keep writing I'm praying God gives you more inspiration and blesses you with more opportunities to share your work and get the recgonition you deserve
- A fan from Kenya ♥♥
What of Sonny chasing the girl ..... Maybe another love story ????
That takes some serious cojones, especially in this day and age. Glad you got that liar's Amazon books taken down. I see that Goodreads still has Diana Hoffman's page still up though. Any way you can get her removed as well? That's some serious bullshit. Don't let this go, Soular. That's Your intellectual property! Good luck, and I look forward to you releasing your work on your terms, which I really encourage you to do. -Lisa
This was all GREAT story and I truly ejoyed it. I hope you publish this!! This is my first time reading anything by this author, but definitely won't be my last.
Hats off to you SOULAR🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾
I realy like your Story about brandon and his wife and this one is a great Story too. i realy like your huge amount of Drama in each of your stories. sometimes it hurts relay to read them. the sadest part of this Story was imho as nic insulted Victoria and she run out in the rain, was kicked out by her parents and nic forced Antonio to kick her out roo. then she had to run to nicky enemy wet and cold because she had no other choice.
i realy look Forward to read your other stories and give this one which made my working hours pass faster 5 stars.
2nd time reading Seven Days it just gets better. In my head the movie would have the following actors as the cast…
Paul Marcone - Robert De Niro
Victoria - Kat Graham / Meagan Good
Nic - James Franco/Ian Somerholder
Sonny - James Marsden/Robert Iller
Jimmy - Ryan Hurst
Raymond - Dominic Purcell
Amber - Rebecca Romjin
Antonio - Steve R. Mcqueen/ Chase Crawford
James - Samuel L. Jackson
Eddie - Christopher Gorham
We all get the chance to cast it in our own minds as we read it. Casting it as an actual movie would be an interesting challenge. Such rich characters.
I am so impressed by the way you managed to incorporate (that damn dress) into the story and every time I read either of these stories it always ceases to Amaze me!! Keep up the good work :)
i agree with the other person. can this be made a movie they better not censor any sex parts
This story is so well written - the flow, the characters - you just don't want to stop reading until you are done.
And as soon as you are done, you regret you have read it all.
Fantastic !!!
The story line was well written. It got me hooked I want to read more like this
Superb absolutely amazing. You need to write a book. Just keep writing stories like these.
Given the time since your last submission I assume that you're no longer here. However I couldn't let this pass.
I've read this series & the Dress series. I'm worried that you have a skewed view of the difference between rough sex & rape. In my opinion many of the encounters in your stories are rape. There is such an imbalance of power between the participants that there is no possibility of non-consent.
Your stories are incredibly well-written but deeply disturbing.
I have finished it and it was amazing I couldn't believe that it ended and I wanted it to continue on but this story is that kind of story you just can't get enough of it. You nailed it. You would be a talented author of a novel. Or a series in that fact.
so, lotta questionable consent stuff going on in both this series and 'dawn dress'
but...
quite possibly the two best romance stories ive read on this site
Wonderful story though I'm not used to the slangs. Please, let the story continue. I need to read about more babies and what happened to Sonny and what their kids will turn out to be...... Interracial seems to be your specialty and has made me wonder, could this be just real? It sure has broadened my view of languages too.
https://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B01N65VU0K/ref=mp_s_a_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1480232894&sr=8-2&pi=SY200_QL40&keywords=bwwm&dpPl=1&dpID=51y9FBJ85HL&ref=plSrch
Still very interesting and hot to read, Soular!
Please update soon and let Sonny be found out...
5*****
I've read this story maybe 10 times, and love it more each new read. Are you ever coming back or writing a book? Your talent is remarkable and I'm certain you would be very successful. Wherever you are, Soular, and whatever your doing I hope you are happy and at peace. Bless you!
This story was great.I couldn't stop reading!! Omg!! I kept wanting more and more!! Awesome story!!
Firstly, I love you but I hate you right now for not finishing Gabriella's story.
Secondly, I hope you are not dead, I really hope so! Please write more stories and do something on 'Sonny'
Thirdly, I still hate you!!!
please please please continue to write. I love your approach to seven days hook line and sinker (is that what they say I don't know cause I don't fish). I would like to run a new story line by you involving an interracial relationship if interested please get in touch kedoh75@gmail.com thanks for sharing this story
I read this after reading Damn dress and all I can say is; you truly have a gift.Thank you!
Best story I've read in a long time, you need to put out another maybe Texas style. Keep it up you are great!!
Please, please, please, can you write more? I am obsessed with Nic and Victoria. They are my ultimate couple, this story really hit a nerve with me, I read it all the time, it's just amazing, I feel like I know Nic and Victoria. Please can you add an epilogue, one where they have their five children and are still madly madly in love with each other, I know it's true for them, but your writing makes things come alive. You are a genius. I hope one day soon you will write another romance like this. Please make dreams come true and write another story.
This was such an awesome and erotic read!!! I loved it, hell, it should be a move, like seriously, you should really sell this story. Loved it!!
Long-time admirer here! I always return to your work when I wanna dive into a good story. Thank you so much for putting your work up for us to enjoy!
I see the comment on your profile that you’re still here — just know that we’ll all be here when you’re ready to come back! You take your time, artist. You’ve got us hooked, believe me; we’re not going anywhere, haha.
This is my seventh time reading 7 days❤️ can't begin to explain how much I love this story. A big hug and kisses to you dear Soular. And Everytime I come back I look for that follow up story on Sonny and his woman. Can't wait to see him correct his ways and make his dad proud while falling in love with that one true love. Cheers! Waiting for the follow ups! Loads of luv
Six is the number of times I've read Seven Days. This story never gets old and will stand the test of time. Please grace us with another good read very soon. Thanks again Soular.
I loved the story. Nic and Victoria are a wonderful couple, even though Victoria did get on my nerves and frustrate the crap out of me a few times. But umm... what happened to Sonny and the black woman that he went after? Did Renny and Paul ever catch up with Anzor? I need to know these things! I wouldn't even mind a spin-off where Antonio finds a hot little wife! I have to say, though, I loved that Marsh and Amber got some comeuppance! I hated them SO intensely. UGH!!!
You are truly telented. I loved every bit of this story. I could definitely see this in movie form. I'll be happy to star as Victoria 😂
I'm an truly embarrassed at the number of times that I have read this story, but it's that FUCKING GOOD. need to be a movie.
Soular, I must say that your writing is just amazing. I had never read a series on Literotica until I, somehow, found Damn Dress. Talk hooked....that darn Sienna and BT had me really quick. I didn't want to stop reading. Then, I selected to read Seven Days and, oh boy, I was, once again, pulled in without hestiation. These stories are in some kind unnerving way addictive. I have read them both at the moment 4 times. I want halt the idea of reading them again but it feels like I will at some point. But today, as every day, since I first completed Seven Days, I am itching to know what is the status of you additional stories. Will you give us more of Nic and Victoria? Does your follow up Damn Dress develop the friendships between the two couples? I'm semi interested in seeing what you do with Sonny and the girl. I am hestitant because I dont see Sonny pulling me like BT and Nic did but who knows. Your writing needs to be published so I am sure you could me in as it always seems so real. Thank you sharing your gift with us. 🙂
I have just finished rereading this story for maybe the 3rd or 4th time and let me tell you it never gets old. It is my absolute favourite of your 3 posted here. I saw you that you had posted saying that you were still around and working on both old and new material but that was more that a year ago. If you really plan to come back I hope that you finish Gabriella and that you give us Sonnys' story. I would really like to see how these two totally flawed characters redeem themselves respectively. Hope you're doing well wherever you are and looking forward to reading more of you work in the near future.
Like many of the comments I see below, I too have read this story over and over again. It was a delight reading it. Thank you for this Soular, really good work. I absolutely love this story.
It’s Feb. 2020 and I still love this read. Also I know I’ve read it over 5 times. Every detail and bit of it is delicious, intriguing and romantic. Now off to read Damn Dress once again. Can’t thank you enough for your art. Also still waiting on Gabriella!
Ridiculous how much I enjoyed this story. Very sexy and romantic. Awesome!
I don't know how many times I've read this story. I keep coming back.
Like someone wrote,this is the best work on Literotica..I come back at least once in three months to reread your works.. excepting other great works from you soular. Can't wait
Wanted to ask if you have started on Sonny Marcone and the woman who walked upon him and Viktor's dead body. Looking forward to reading more from you. Take care
This is at least my 6th read through. Love this story! So glad to see in your bio that you are continuing to write. Crossing fingers one of the stories will be about Sonny and another about Antonio.
This is pretty woman, godfather and other shit thrown together. I have read tons of literotica stories, but the author has good knack for storytelling and not mixing up his characters, and keeping the flow smooth.
I just discovered this story, and I read the entire thing in one sitting. Hands-down the best story on Literotica. I've never read anything on here this good. You're an amazing writer.
I have read this story so many times! Okay Soular, we need Sonny’s story. Can you make that happen?