All Comments on 'Seven Ten Split'

by Budapestexpat

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
sopharoonessopharoonesover 10 years ago
lmao!

that was a great laugh out loud-athon, pure reality and absolute accuracy in my book. At first i was like hmmkaayyy...but then it clicked right about the time she asked him to "penetrate" her. Nice one

BudapestexpatBudapestexpatabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback!

Thank you! Though I have no idea who Eliza is.

A little backstory: this is not very far from reality!

Cheers!

m1k3m1k3about 11 years ago
Good attempt.

Sounds like sex with ELIZA, the A.I. therapist..... funny, keep writing!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous