All Comments on 'Seven Years as a Wife Ch. 04'

I'm really enjoying your writing!

Good story

SHEEEEEE

You are such a tease, great story please don't stop

Great

Nice one but too short

Leeanna, Hi. I see there can be many more chapters, the way you write! It does seem that Mel has accepted her new life, rather quickly. I wonder where and which way it will lead to. To use a movie quote, "you have my attention, Rose!"

Michael.

I really like your story!! Is seems to be talking a nice direction.

Thanks for the positive comments. I will try to write some more this week. It takes 3-4 days for them to put it up sometimes. I have had more feedback here than any of the other sites.

Mel does seem to be accepting it all too quickly. Remember she has been alone for a while and never known love. Simon can provide physical and emotional attention, and financial security. What else does a forced gurl to want?

Leeann, you write very well and know how Mel thinks .. and Angie seems to know her way around .. I want a loving life partner and lover .. a nice home to make my own, our own .. a quiet, peaceful place for us to be a couple away from the world .. I want and need to be a wife and homemaker and even dream of even being a mom too .. I also happen to be a woman who will soon be a post-op Transwoman .. call me Rose 🌹

Yay! An actual story to read, rather than poorly written sex stuff! Keep going please, I'm a huge fan ;)

Fabulous story

Superb so well written and so enjoyable , thank you xx

Will there be a Part 5?

Thanks, I decied to have a bit of a break from writting for a week ar two. Gone a bit stale. I was going to have Mel start to use her newfound "womanly whiles" to help out her partner and perhaps get a new car.

The angle of this story is even though she was initially forced, she has grown to enjoy playing the feminine role. Being a small efeminant male is not much fun in a strong, rich mans world. Being a feminine woman can open doors, albeit for a price.

I will write some more, perhaps in the next few weeks

I can't wait for the next installment, but write for you, leanna19, not for us!!

Wonderful story, you must continue…

Veronica

Like the story. I do hope that you continue with the line. Good luck.

I’m Cuban, 5’6” with naturally full lips and wide hips. I cannot pass and I don’t try but European and north American men hit on me constantly. I’m a caddy at an exclusive club in Arizona and in the privacy of their rooms I act as feminine as these rich white men want me to. The tips are good but the power shift when I’m on my knees with their cocks in my mouth is exhilarating!

Wow , you should write that and post it on here.

Please continue!!

Oh God I love this series! I can't wait till the next chapter.

Love it.

Delicious storyline please do continue xxx