by stripgnd
This is a very creative concept! The story is very compelling and well thought out. The sex is definitely rough as expected but very hot. I hope you continue with the series as this provides a great foundation. 5 stars from me.
Cool story concept. It feels very real. I like it in the POV of the bargirl. Could Some chapters could be from Hannah’s POV? Looking forward to more installments.
Good start. I liked the ‘poor girl with the English cockney accent’ protagonist (I’m from America). I would like to see more of this story. 5 stars.
This story is amazing and I hope it spawns a huge series. Can't wait for the next one!
Well written, character dev. good. Love the character bias that carries throughout this piece. Love the progression. The world you've created is 100% plausible.! Kudos on that!