All Comments on 'Sex Fighting League Ch. 01'

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Camguy4funCamguy4fun4 months ago

This is a very creative concept! The story is very compelling and well thought out. The sex is definitely rough as expected but very hot. I hope you continue with the series as this provides a great foundation. 5 stars from me.

pgcibosspgciboss4 months ago

Cool story concept. It feels very real. I like it in the POV of the bargirl. Could Some chapters could be from Hannah’s POV? Looking forward to more installments.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Good start. I liked the ‘poor girl with the English cockney accent’ protagonist (I’m from America). I would like to see more of this story. 5 stars.

judsonccjudsoncc3 months ago

This story is amazing and I hope it spawns a huge series. Can't wait for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymous7 days ago

Well written, character dev. good. Love the character bias that carries throughout this piece. Love the progression. The world you've created is 100% plausible.! Kudos on that!

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