All Comments on 'Sex in the Cafe'

This was going really well right up to the sex bit. The pace and build-up of tension was wonderful but the sex just seemed like it was thrown in there

This is a cute story

Thank you..

I once dated a barista but never did anything in the shop.

However, i think both Noah and Amy are consensual, it is just that the sudden introduction of intimacy to the lattes was a bit unexpected (though welcoeed) for Amy

U had a solid contender til that point. Great character development, delivery and setting for an intimate scene but rushing through the details at the end killed all that effort.

Looking forward to more from you though. Cheers.