by Galloglaich
Not really that enjoyable. More Tom, more sex with Cerria. Less other crap
I disagree. I feel this installment adds a good bit of world building to an already fun setting and sets us up for more fun later.
Disagree with your commentary on 'pretty lousy.' This is actually solid world crafting in terms of writing and very enjoyable reading. I would only offer that as a reader, I am sometimes finding it difficult to invest into the Fentin (and associated characters) storyline. I understand the purpose to propel the story forward, but am awaiting the payoff as to how it ties everything together (hopefully).
I can't help but think Fentin is behind what has happened to Vendr. This is building to what I hope is a great climax.
I check back once a day every single day. I do hope to see the next Installment or so sometime in the near future.
your a great story teller. not too shallow that a story isn't interesting, and not too deep you need a separate book for explaining the details lol. love it
So I just finished marathon reading this....and then went and marathon read your other work. And I've got to say good job. I love this story, and Cemetery Summons is up there too. I really hope that you continue with this story and see it to completion, even though I swear there's some wonky things going on that aren't explained properly(it really just makes me want to read more, to see if they are)
man, are you around??
are you planning on writing more??
an update would be great..
it is always the innocent that have got to pay for some assholes desire for power. well i hope he is happy with the power.