All Comments on 'Sex on the Beach'

A little disconnect from the series, a lot more active. Need to complete the storyline with the corporal punishment ordered by the judge.

This story is an exercise I decided to do by writing only in dialogue. I know it's not a very good story, and I was even hesitant to publish it. What I'd like to know is if the dialogue alone is enough to convey the feelings.

The punishment part is something I find very difficult to write because I don't have experience, but I'll do it because writing is something new and challenging for me.

I know that beach, it's not deserted although almost no one goes there because it's dangerous, the dialogue is very well written but not enough, and the story could have more details.