All Comments on 'Sex outside with my Non-Binary love'

Put somewhere else.

There's nothing that immediately strikes me as -wrong- with the text, so I must conclude the reviewbombing is spiteful 'phobes.

Heya :) I really appreciate you saying that, makes me feel better about the low ratings :)

SirDigbyChickenCaesar - Typical conclusion for a narrow minded commentator. You have no argument so you resort to insults. You free opinion phobe.

You can't take criticism. Stop writing. Let me guess you are going to delete the comment.

Two nonbinaries... in a lesbian category... make it make sense.

I understand where you're coming from, the traditional definition of Lesbian is "women who love women" but the definition is expanding and has been adopted by many non-binary and trans people who find their attraction is best defined as sapphic. Of course, I respect if you don't see it that way because it is a personal thing. but there are some, myself included, who do see it that way

Really, what a struggle to write never mind read - what could be a good story.

The sooner this binary fad is over the better for society.

Brave of you to comment anonymously. I'm sorry you feel that way and I hope one day you find the strength to open yourself up to change, and the things that scare you.

It's not the same anonymous. No fear here. I will add: brave of you to be crowding and occupying female space. In regards to anonymity - show us the way. Provide all of your personal information. That will teach us a lesson.

Different anon then the other. Absolutely lovely. The emotion of the whole thing got me. I wanted more whem we reached the end.

I myself know a know someone that I've known for years who recently declared themself non-binary. This is a real thing.

@CharlieP: sorry that you attracted this kind of commenter. Please keep up the good work!

toesucker1 - keep this space lesbian. This the only section that caters to alternative labels.

Beautiful, absolutely wonderful queer love story

So hot and sexy! Love this and sending it to one of my lovers to enjoy as well.

Omg this was so poetic! I especially loved how poetically their parts were described! As a nonbinary person, private part descriptions can get uncomfy quickly, but this made it seem so magical!