All Comments on 'Sh4dows H4ll Pt. 04 - Trainers Perks'

I like the naiveté of the writers voice, which suggests a girl going mindlessly into her submission.

On the other hand, it's often just poorly edited: slavesara needs to be TiH *as a writer* by a Masterful editor.

Again, luv the voice and sexy action, but missing conflict, it's not exactly "storytelling*

Best,

~PM

Thank you Sir i appreciate your time to message me.

With respect, i am not a writer but a girl living the dream 24/7 and writing it down.

Have a brilliant Christmas Sir and a Peaceful New Year, sara xx