by Chancem77
Great chapter, love how it’s all progressing. Trying to hard to be patient with waiting for the happy ever after. This is such good writing and a lovely intricate world in which it’s all set.
I was thinking how complex this is and a different word came to mind: intricate. Such an intricate tapestry you’re weaving. Fantastic!
Thank you all. Your comments mean so much to me and they motivate me to keep writing.
I think this might be one of your best stories yet. Your imagery is so good it's like watching a movie! My heart does out for Rowan but at least he has Thaden to watch out for him. The true queen will have his day! Please write fast :)
This story is really incredible. I come to this site for obvious reasons: to read stories about cute twinks with crushes their jock roommates seeing their love returned and getting fucked senseless. But every once in a while I come across as story like this that is actually a fascinating world with interesting characters, and it could really be a novella. Outstanding writing.