All Comments on 'Shared Birthdays Pt. 01'

Cousin loving is one of the best and here in Australia it's legal. Great start I hope you write more please.

In the United States, 19 states and District of Columbia are legal for marrying, and/or offsprings.

Part 2????? Part 1 was great

I'm a '47 model Australian guy, and I've been in a relationship with my favourite cousin for some time now. She's a year older and our love making is exquisite. We both admitted to fantasising and masturbating over each other for years. This story has a beautiful feeling to it and making love with each other os so full filling. 💖

You can't stop the story now... you have too keep it Rollin.

Just getting to the good parts

When do we get the rest of the story? I'm seeing a new newlywed couple here. 5*

The ending was very abrupt, and the part about her getting shot doesn't seem to move the story forward at all. The back story about playing doctor a couple of times when they were younger is a great setup. You could have mentioned earlier that he'd masturbated while thinking about her.

Thanks for your comments. Please remember that all submissions are held for admin review before posting. Part 2 was submitted over the weekend and should be approved today or tomorrow. Part 3 is written and will submit once 2 is posted.

I rather liked the feel and action as portrayed in the story!

Reliving the past, enjoying the present!