All Comments on 'Sharing Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Should have proof read it before submitting it! Mistake in his /her ages?

Bargyn1Bargyn1about 1 year ago

Great start, looking forward to chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You could use an editor as it is difficult to find your own grammatical errors and repetitions. Just saying....

LucieLou007LucieLou007about 1 year ago

Great story enjoyed that, looking forward to Part 2 honey

lingus60lingus6010 months ago

Bring on part 2. Big turn on as an older guy often fantasising about younger women

LIDiverLIDiver8 months ago

Wonderful start.

Hope you haven’t given up on finishing it?

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Mid to late 20s woman, interested in sharing my erotic thoughts. Partly inspired by real experiences but not all.

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