All Comments on 'Sharp Turn'

Clever premise.

But sex was too short. Too lacking in details.

Needed more foreplay. Needed her baring her tits, or having him bare them.

Do you like them? Show me how much you like them.

Needed extended playing with his cock. And his balls. Before moving forward. Does this feel good? Should I do it some more? Are you close to cumming? Dont cum yet.

Four stars.

Super well written, and so hot!!! Wish you would have finished it up though, I would have loved to read the rest.