All Comments on 'She Said She Was Cold'

Well written for a first shot.

Little hard to know what the story is really all about.

You said it started with a dream, and like dream, suddenly stopped by waking, it left us wondering.

Good luck!

First story!

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It was nice, but way too short :) C'mon, give us more :)

A start.....where it goes

A good start !

@Marasso-Coming from you, this floors me. You’re one of the best storytellers on here. I feel like I’ve been complimented on my singing by Rihanna.

@BoydPercy-You’re very generous considering it’s my first and I wrote this story on my phone!

@Anonymous-You're right, it’s short, too short, and my next stories will be better. I have so many great story ideas that I want to get down but first, I need to find the time! First world problems… I really appreciate your kind words and feedback. And as far as the dream ending early, yeah that sucks. My subconscious mind enjoys teasing me with some gold but then snatching it away with the daylight.