All Comments on 'Shona Pt. 03: The Shock of The New'

Like how you are developing this romance while making their sexual compatibility so very clear. Entire piece sexually charged while adding some intrigue and a touch of drama. Love following/watching your MCs explore.

So deliciously juicy. I'm happy for Aly and Shona. And so many tantalizing possibilities for the Showcase now. You've really set things up wonderfully, Lissy.

The crescendo is building into something and can't wait for the next chapter I won't be surprised if Viv succumbs and ends up on Showcase herself!

Thanks for your comments, all. I'm pleased with how it's developing and I've a few ideas for where the characters go next. Watch this space.

NB. I noticed an embarrassing number of typos in this story after publication, so there is an edited/corrected version now awaiting approval. I need to be more careful. 😊

Titillating and erotic. I’m so impressed in how you define and describe your character interactions, the bar scene, the massage, it draws me in even more. The interaction details with CLO and Aly at the bar, just like I was a fly on the wall watching.

Bravo!! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Titillating and erotic. I’m so impressed in how you define and describe your character interactions, the bar scene, the massage, it draws me in even more. The interaction details with CLO and Aly at the bar, just like I was a fly on the wall watching.

Bravo!! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

OK, OK, one more chapter before bed. Dam, this is like a novel you can't stop reading. Thank you.

Martin594: Thanks. Glad you are enjoying it.

PS - It actually is a novel - available soon. 🙂