All Comments on 'Shona Pt. 05: The Showcase Hots Up'

None stop debauchery — Viv is a hoot. You are having fun with Shona and her friends.

“another triumph of sizzling erotica” — Oh yes!!!! This story keeps getting hotter. It’s going on my favorites list immediately.

I loved the early longerie scene when they lost control of themselves. And later, the photos of pussy drool? OMG.

Now the only thing left is how Viv will finally see the light!

Migbird: Thanks. Glad you find Viv a hoot! And, yes, it is fun. 🙂

toesucker1: Thank you. We obviously share the same idea of what's hot.... to some extent anyway.

And thanks to you and whoever else has given it a decent score. Some of the early ratings were gruesome. Obviously, not everyone shares my sexual tastes.

Bloody hell, Lissy, you have definitely cranked up the eroticism! The lingerie scene was great and could be a standalone story. It was that intense. And for Viv...? I guess we will have to wait and see!

The way you kept the structure of the story tight, was key. You could have easily gone off into so many directions and lose the reader, which I have seen in other literotica stories. 😁

CupidCupid: Thanks. The tightness of the structure was accidental really. It was just how it naturally developed. Hope the next part is as good. There's a bit less sex, but something does happen with Viv... 😉

Your vision to details and then their descriptions had my mind's eye focusing on Shona and Aly. Thank you