All Comments on 'Shona Pt. 09: Shoot for the Stars'

“…has been a great experience.” An understatement for sure, and an exploration/realization for Reya not to get too serious. Like what you did with that character from beginning to goodbye/be seeing you — you surprised me which is nice when reading author’s that resonate.

So fantastically good. I'm seeing a theme in your stories about the value of love and connection vs. just sex.

And now that exclusivity has been surpassed, what will be next with the group?

I forgot to mention Tilly's Big Baps. I loved the part where Tilly and Reya were "bust-ling" with each other.

Migbird: Thanks. I wanted to explore what an experienced pornstar might be feeling. Spending time with these 'parochial small town girls' gave her a new perspective.

toesucker1: Thanks. Glad you liked the bust-ling.🙂 I've never experienced anything like this, being 'only' a 36C (UK size) but It's how I imagine two REALLY busty and sexy women might react to each other.

Another good chapter, with another slight twist. I like the way you have introduced new characters to the story, without losing the overall pace of the story and overwhelming the reader.

The only issue I have, and thus us me being slightly pernickety, is how you are going to conclude this series?

Othwise, each chapter, like this one, becomes more and more erotic and sexy, as the story evolves!!

CupidCupid: The ending? 🤔 I am ruminating on that as we speak...

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