All Comments on 'Showering at Work Pt. 01'

Great start, please continue!

Good start, can't wait for next chapter. Maybe she can play with his butt more, or keep him naked in office after his shower. Just play with him tuching him. They dont need to have sex together.

Fun idea. The ending went awry, it was rushed and you duplicated things spoiling the flow.

Why on earth would there be a shower in an office? Stupid.

I thought that was a good short story. You did a lot better with your first effort than I did with my first effort at writing. Sexy story, I hope that you keep writing.

I do like your story and style of writing. You did much better than I did on my first try, writing isn’t my forte.