by Scorpio86
Very nice! This is again a great chapter. I like the rather slow pace of this story and I'm very excited how it will continue. What role will Mary play? How will her exhibitionistic needs taken into account? Will Wendy encourage them while benefiting because of her voyeuristic likes? Will the story feature some bi-curiosity? What will happen with Eric? How will the interaction with Tony develop? I can hardly wait for the next chapter :) Thank you for this great story!
I think its a great start for someone who has never submitted a story before...can t wait to see how the rest plays out! keep up the good work
Still a good premise.
Still to much 'story' and not enough sex.
Three stars.
Still a good premise.
Again, needed details.
Needed dialog -- even if by texts -- about what she saw him do. Did she like it? Would she like to see more? Would she like to tell him what to do to/with his cock? Was she getting hot? Was she getting wet? Was she touching herself? Was she imagining him touching her? Her touching him? etc.
Four stars.