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We cleaned up, got dressed, and walked to breakfast, her on my arm. It was a beautiful day, and I was in the company of a beautiful woman. She was radiant in the morning light.
After breakfast, we walked back down for one last look at the Falls, finally checking out just prior to 11. Three hours later, we were in Ithica, her new home.
We'd left home only a few days ago, siblings embarking on a long road trip. We reached our destination as lovers; the true journey having nothing to do with the road.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 month agoDoesn't feel genuine or realistic at all. Build up to sex does not feel earned or truly emotional, its all so rushed and comes out of nowhere. Also, there is no way a girl who's never had an orgasm would have any proficiency at giving a handjob or a blowjob. Good sex requires practice, there's a reason people's first times are awkward. The descriptions of the characters at the start are also redundant; show, don't tell. Let the reader's imaginations create an image of the characters, don't simply tell them to imagine a specific famous person. I ended up just skipping those paragraphs entirely because they didn't help to create an image of the characters at all. And, if the story is well written and emotive enough, the physical characteristics of the characters should not matter.
storyteller4u2about 2 months agoGreat storyline, some problems as already commented on (both 401 and 403 are major "interstate" highways with the heaviest traffic in the country) and one more proofread may have caught wrong words and misspelled words that trip up the flow of the story when reading.
Please write more of what happens to Amy and Peter, this could be made into an epic tale of love encountered by those who are not supposed to become intimate, but do and have to navigate the world knowing their truth. My hope is the next story will get that 5th star!
Anonymous2 months agoPlease do research. It's a paved road! It has 4 lanes with 30,000 cars! Omg, there is so much pavement! Since the 90's, the road has been the opposite of dirt! When I read my free incest porn, I want my roadways described accurately! Why did you say it was a dirt road?! Whyyyyyyyyyyy!
Anonymous2 months agoGreat story. Love to hear more. She shoud transer and attend college with brother. Hope they stay together. WishI had a sister lik that.
Va Ham
DarkkBrothaOne2 months agoFirst off, I like the story. I really do. Just a few things that I find a little...off.
1) I understand the mental acuity of "nerds." but for the life of me; I'm trying to figure out where Amy became such a "sex pot?" While you explained how Peter had had at least a little sexual experience, Amy is written to an almost nun-like virgin. So while it's hot af that she is so willing to explore sex and her sexuality over a few days trip with Peter, I find it a little far-fetched that she would have a Nina Hartley-esque knowledge of all the advanced sexual activity they explored.
2) I LOVE that Amy fell for her brother over their trip. Yet, I am a little put off by HOPW she did it. I don't believe a woman (or a man) can't fall in love with someone over a shared sexual experience. But that in and of itself is not "love." But lust or extreme sexual attraction. True love is built on far deeper emotions. More importantly, you didn't detail how these feelings may have evolved out of a deep mutual love BEFORE the trip.
3) Again...I DO love this story and I hope that you may have room for a possible "return trip home" to see if a few years separation (for college) will either stem this love affair...or make it a deep family discussion once they get back home. Can't wait to see if you can complete this.
4 stars!!!
Anonymous2 months agoGreat story. Just curious why he didn't join college for years of sister fuck!!
Anonymous2 months agoLike prior cpomments, a little research should be done before posting a story. As someone living half a mile from the 403, I can vouch that it was never an "honest to God dirt road going from Woodstock to Lake Ontario." It was never open to traffic prior to being paved as a divided 4 lane highway with on and off ramps.
Otherwise this was a good story.
