by pujo1950
A good story with room for more. I would love to it go further, to point of the girls convincing the boys to get intimate. The sisters have done each other. How about rimjobs all round.
I enjoyed your story. I hope you will continue with the characters and the story
5stars
I enjoyed this one for the most part, but I wasn't thrilled with Pam and Rick coupling up. I would have preferred that Gene (narrator) be permanently partnered and exclusive with Pam while Rick and Carrie "find each other" and become a couple that weekend.
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"Do you want to mess around with Desiree or Pam?"
Yeah, you triggered my memory with that one. During eighth grade, I made a new friend. We sat right next to each other in our Homeroom class because our last names were alphabetically adjacent. Desiree Leon was certainly very pretty and hindsight being 20/20, I could have fallen for her had she made the first move. It's a paradox to me that I never crushed on her. She was my type and certainly attractive enough. But we were close platonic friends. I suppose on some level that I loved her like a sister. She is a very good person and I miss her so much. 😢
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Getting back to your story, I already made mention of one thing that disappointed me. But even more than that, I don't enjoy anything pertaining to analingus. I find it very disgusting and a complete turn off. 😒 So while I enjoyed a lot of your story, those two items caused me to knock off credit. 4/5
I enjoyed the story quite a bit. I would love the see the me start to explore each other. Maybe eventually they all sell their houses and buy ont large house that they can all stay in.
Great story
Keep up the good work and starting chapter 2 in a few minutes!!
But I would like to say to those that don't like anal play it's sort of like a man that will not eat his wife!!
Show me someone that will not do that and I will show you a marriage that I can break up 😜😜