by pujo1950
Great story
Keep up the good work and starting chapter 2 in a few minutes!!
But I would like to say to those that don't like anal play it's sort of like a man that will not eat his wife!!
Show me someone that will not do that and I will show you a marriage that I can break up 😜😜
I enjoyed the story quite a bit. I would love the see the me start to explore each other. Maybe eventually they all sell their houses and buy ont large house that they can all stay in.
I enjoyed this one for the most part, but I wasn't thrilled with Pam and Rick coupling up. I would have preferred that Gene (narrator) be permanently partnered and exclusive with Pam while Rick and Carrie "find each other" and become a couple that weekend.
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"Do you want to mess around with Desiree or Pam?"
Yeah, you triggered my memory with that one. During eighth grade, I made a new friend. We sat right next to each other in our Homeroom class because our last names were alphabetically adjacent. Desiree Leon was certainly very pretty and hindsight being 20/20, I could have fallen for her had she made the first move. It's a paradox to me that I never crushed on her. She was my type and certainly attractive enough. But we were close platonic friends. I suppose on some level that I loved her like a sister. She is a very good person and I miss her so much. 😢
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Getting back to your story, I already made mention of one thing that disappointed me. But even more than that, I don't enjoy anything pertaining to analingus. I find it very disgusting and a complete turn off. 😒 So while I enjoyed a lot of your story, those two items caused me to knock off credit. 4/5
I enjoyed your story. I hope you will continue with the characters and the story
5stars
A good story with room for more. I would love to it go further, to point of the girls convincing the boys to get intimate. The sisters have done each other. How about rimjobs all round.