by bumpercars
This story draws some inspiration from Ravensing's story "Secret College Hazing," which you can check out if you are so inclined.
Always look forward to your stuff. Bumps aren't a personal kink, but that didn't matter even a little. Well written and very, very hot. Five stars, easily. Cheers.
Semiosis50,
I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for the delicious stars! I know that feeling of reading a story and really enjoying it even though the kinks it presents aren't exactly mine, and I'm flattered that I can do the same for you.
Another absolute masterpiece.
Hands down the best author on this site. I always look forward to your stories. You deliver harder than the girls knocked up in your stories. Keep them coming.
Anon,
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying my work. I do plan to continue writing, and I hope you'll keep reading.
Gonzo141,
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the series. It's fun to do stories that are thematically linked but with their own characters.
Another great story.
My only suggestion: it can sometimes get a bit repetitive about themes such as mysteriousness. You could, for example, slowly peel back so he gradually starts suspecting who it might be.
TheDeepThinker,
I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for the feedback.
From my perspective, mystery didn't feel like a big component in this story - the protagonist hadn't seen Elsie or Suki before the ending scene, but I feel like he got a decent idea of who they were regardless.
Ashstone,
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I do plan to keep writing.
Anon,
I'm glad you enjoyed it! You're right that it's not the most realistic, but that's by design.
Hit some of my favorite kinks, and hit them well. Gonna go look at the rest of what you've got up.
Anon,
I'm glad the story did it for you, and I hope you enjoy my other stories as well. I've written stories in a few categories, but most of them have at least one impregnation.
Good as always. Why not indicate the gender of the child that the girl will give birth to at the end of the story
Anon,
Thanks! I guess I haven't thought too much about the gender of the babies in my stories because it's not the focus of my kink - some people would prefer a girl, or prefer a boy, and I'm over here like Mr. Incredible going "Babies is babies!" But I suppose that some of the characters might want to know, and some readers might, too, so perhaps I'll include that detail in future stories.
Thank you. And the last question. Are you planning on writing a series of stories about one superhero impregnating many different women? Old and young, white and black, married and single, white-collar workers and students, etc.
Anon,
That's a very specific question. I write a lot of stories involving impregnation, but I don't have that exact series in the works. I tend to like variety in the characters I depict (although I don't often write about married women cheating), so it's not a bad idea, but I'm not working on it right now.
Holy cow that was fantastically well written! I got off and then kept reading cause it was just too good!
Since the uni at the center of your extended pregnancy universe seems to sport upwards of a 50% pregnancy rate among female students, maybe it would make sense to have a character working at the campus facility for the support of pregnant and parenting students, to explore their end of the story. Just a thought.
Larrup,
That's an interesting idea with a lot of possibilities! Thank you.
I’d love in this universe, if the sorority was powerful that they control the entire town supply doctors, obygn birth control, and even DNA tests. Like it’d be so hot if most girls didn’t know who their baby daddies were, or even their own fathers, except the leaders of the sorority.
Anon,
I hint in some of the other SLT stories that the Sigmas have a huge amount of power on campus and beyond, so that's not far off. They are careful about how much trouble they cause, though - their goals are mostly throwing raucous parties, enjoying the boys, and demonstrating how much more control they have than most girls.
Interestingly, the next Sigma story will deal a bit more with the idea of a girl who doesn't know who her dad is, for reasons that might very well be the Sigmas' fault.