by bumpercars
Pretty good. Constructive suggestion: add a short recap or summary at the beginning of future chapters, or it may be confusing for casual readers.
TheDeepThinker,
I'm glad you liked it.
I feel like the chapters in the Sigma Lambda Tau series are loosely connected, but they don't depend on previous chapters to work. Still, I'll think about how they're joined together and whether the connections should be clearer.
This story was commissioned by an anonymous patron through a generous donation to a sexual assault prevention charity.
I enjoyed this as a stand-alone story and in fact would not have opened it if I had known it was a chapter in something longer. I think the snippets of history and context you wove into it were enough that a separate recap/summary isn't necessary. The story read as an episode in the lives of characters that exist beyond the bounds of the narrative, and for that I am grateful. Thank you.
Anon,
I'm glad you enjoyed the story! I hadn't gotten that far, but I think you are right - Emily will have a boy and Jessica will have a girl.
Anon,
You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I'm flattered that the characters felt real to you.
The Sigma Lambda Tau series is loosely connected, in that the stories all involve the same sorority, but they're all meant to stand alone. You could read any of them first without missing anything, or so I hope.
Anon,
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I do intend to write more, including more Sigma Lambda Tau stories.
Anon,
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I should have a new story chapter in the next few weeks.
Anon,
I'm glad you enjoy them! I enjoy writing them, and I do intend to expand the series.