All Comments on 'Silence'

Not exactly a typical romance but I like it

Good story, well written with only a few minor typos. So much better to read a story in ‘proper’ English 😉

Thanks Smiffy and Anon...I wasn't sure if this would be a bit too 'out there' for the romance section! Apologies on the typos you've spotted...I can see a pesky one in the epilogue that's sneaked through - amended version below :) :

"Your greedy little pussy's crying for me to fill it, Kira. Just like this."

I must be too close to the words to spot any others...but glad you like the 'proper' English ;)

Great story and well written. Finding 2 men to give her everything she needs is brilliant. I have a feeling that eventually G & B will want more from the relationship and things will change. Maybe better, or worse, but they'll change.

.

Cheers

AS they say ... silence is golden ... and sexy.

I prefer to read stories where I can root for at least one of the characters. You've created something where all the characters are weird and I don't like any of them. 2*

Thanks Harga and stewart!

Awww, Overcritical, sorry you didn't like it but isn't it nice to think there's someone out there for everyone, no matter how 'weird' they are? Was kind of the whole point of the story...

Maybe a match made in heaven!

5

Thanks Boyd...I think so!