All Comments on 'Silent Submission Ch. 03'

by Ms_Lilith

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
enflaming

as each chapter unfolds, the erotisism heightens

reignopheliareignopheliaover 16 years ago
Beautiful analogy.

"Your other hand, moving slower than the earth around the sun..." You definitely have a knack for coming up with creative, fresh and gorgeous analogys/metaphors. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Exquisite torture

I hold my breath as she holds hers! Beautifully written with dreamy imagery.

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