All Comments on 'Silhouette'

Wonderful story!

Erotic stories with a unique twist don't come along every day--and rarely with photo art, too!

This was well crafted all the way, especially as Mary overcame her shyness and got hot enough to want to perform for an audience. Nice work!

The intentional pretense of privacy is what I love the most about the "entertainment" in this story. It creates layers of metaphor and reality, mystery and reveal, hidden and seen. Heard! It would be captivating to actually watch, and it is very hot to read.

Great story. The inclusion of photos at the end changes this from fantasy to reality and makes the story even more exciting. Do we have to wait a whole year to get the next chapter? [smile]

Well, if you must know, I love the tentacle sex stories and am trying to write one. Given the 5 year gap between Lighthouse and Silhouette you might have a wait.

Also, both Lighthouse and Silhouette take place at the same actual campground. If you know it, PM me. I wonder who will recognize it. And, yes, we took the Silhouette photos there fairly recently.

This is really good, fun to read, and erotic. The suspense and anticipation is incredibly erotic. Please add more.

The sequence with Rose was so erotic, I was so I wet, but after that it went downhill and became a little boring. The silhouette idea showed great imagination, but went on to long.

Really loved it. Add in some more threesome and/or foursome action

It's two years since I last commented on this story, nothings change to want me to change them