All Comments on 'Sis's Transformation'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Clever working in of the songs!

SkaamPlaasMeisieSkaamPlaasMeisie6 months ago

Sounds like a fun strip game, and a great way to pop one's cherry. Wish that I was Sis.

Stoere_BoerStoere_Boer6 months ago

Strip Charades sounds like a fun strip game for three couples. You should write more stories on this theme.

PlaasJapiePlaasJapie6 months ago

What an interesting twist on a party game. Nice build-up of the story with hot action along the way. Love it! 5* and favorite!

Stoere_BoerStoere_Boer3 months ago

Almost forgot to score this great story. Wish I was John who popped Sis's cherry with a creampie.

Nice selection of very appropriate songs, but not a wide variety of artists.

I would love to read another story on the strip Charades theme.

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Love to read hot stories with some drama. Got going on a few stories. I try to give it a South African flavour, while keeping it relevant to the international audience. If you like my stories, give it a high score. Enjoy.