by amenarimix
You need to work on your dialogue, it’s difficult to know who’s talking sometimes. But your story is hot as fuck so please continue. Please ramp up the humiliation for the prince. Let his kingdom see him service huge cocks like a slut and loving it
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So the queen can't figure out, the tramp lady is feminizing her son? I mean she's even calling her princess. Kind of weird.