All Comments on 'Sister Love'

I am guessing "Tracie's little sister" was a draft for this story. this had that beginning, middle and end that a story needs. Well done this one got a 5 star rating. I love how the younger sister was the more dominate one. I hope you write more like this. thank you for sharing.

Pappasleaze

many are like I'm always tinker expanding I listen to feedback then re-write them much like my sex life and fantasies always evolving I wish I was more obsessed with spelling and grammar like so many our but who has the time it is free erotica my soul bared Thank you for your support Cher iXOXO

Just too many errors to enjoy. Sorry.

Slipping a class of wine. What the hell is that?

A " Slipping a Class Of Wine" is a sophisticated expression used by lesbians

Short, sweet and sexy, but hard to read with all the punctuation and grammar errors. I'd recommend running it through a checker such as Grammarly. Doesn't take long and it'll pick up 95% of the issues.