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Click here"Or sooner if you like. Just whistle," adds Shauna.
"You know how to whistle, don't you Jack?" Sarah asks in a seductive whisper.
"You just put your lips together...," Shauna says.
"And blow," finishes Sarah.
With that, it's time for me to cool off in ocean and hope that my erection subsides. I grab a towel and as I walk past Taylor, she opens one eye and asks:
"Hey Jack, goin' fishing?"
"Nope, just a quick swim to cool down," I answer.
"Then why are you bringing that pole along with you?" Taylor says while giving a nod to my obvious boner.
"Looks like you enjoyed your special treat with the twins." She giggles and adds, "You're welcome by the way."
The touchy-feely-teasing games the girls are playing have built up a huge load of cum in my balls. I need to calm down or get Jeannie alone before they start to ache and turn blue. I need an excuse to get her away from her friends so we can fuck, but until then a cool dip in the ocean will have to do.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous7 months agoI also encountered a glaring problem causing me to skip over s considerable amount of dialogue. 2 stars.
Anonymous7 months agoJack is written as a very weak and immature individual; completely opposite of what one would expect of a 6 year veteran Naval officer. Yes, there are some. But most of such character are flushed out prior to the 6th year.
Reduces the impact of the story substantially,
PornGoddess2over 1 year agoWhatsamatterU said
"Four stars for the Humphrey Bogart reference?"
Five for the Heinlein one.
How're things on Luna, Stu?
Anonymousabout 3 years agoJust a few grammatical/spelling corrections:
"Grown" is the past participle of grew. You meant "Groan" like the low rumbling sound one makes, right?
"Horse" as we all know is the animal. "Hoarse" is the texture of voice.
But all in all... The story left me wanting more. 😁😁😁
Htslover 3 years agoI just read it again for a better remember and i still love it. just one thing i found a little weird. You wrote, that he went down on his knees and is level with Taylors face. I don’t know his height, but taking my height of 1.85 meter, she must be around 1.4something meter, which wood be quite funny and not really real.
bshell47over 3 years agoI feel like Jack , hard and looking for a warm, wet place to store my cock.
Very erotic story.
What an exciting group of beauties.
Back to the next chapter.
