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Click here"Or sooner if you like. Just whistle," adds Shauna.
"You know how to whistle, don't you Jack?" Sarah asks in a seductive whisper.
"You just put your lips together...," Shauna says.
"And blow," finishes Sarah.
With that, it's time for me to cool off in ocean and hope that my erection subsides. I grab a towel and as I walk past Taylor, she opens one eye and asks:
"Hey Jack, goin' fishing?"
"Nope, just a quick swim to cool down," I answer.
"Then why are you bringing that pole along with you?" Taylor says while giving a nod to my obvious boner.
"Looks like you enjoyed your special treat with the twins." She giggles and adds, "You're welcome by the way."
The touchy-feely-teasing games the girls are playing have built up a huge load of cum in my balls. I need to calm down or get Jeannie alone before they start to ache and turn blue. I need an excuse to get her away from her friends so we can fuck, but until then a cool dip in the ocean will have to do.
I also encountered a glaring problem causing me to skip over s considerable amount of dialogue. 2 stars.
Jack is written as a very weak and immature individual; completely opposite of what one would expect of a 6 year veteran Naval officer. Yes, there are some. But most of such character are flushed out prior to the 6th year.
Reduces the impact of the story substantially,
WhatsamatterU said
"Four stars for the Humphrey Bogart reference?"
Five for the Heinlein one.
How're things on Luna, Stu?