All Comments on 'Sisterhood - Initiation Ch. 40'

The suspense is just killing me I’ll have you know I hope you are proud of this ugh….

The chapters I wish were longer. I understand you have your ways and probably enjoy building the suspense to some degree. But as us the readers we are going to blow our minds soon.

Hi shadowofall thanks for sharing your thoughts again! I'm really sorry about the slow build of suspense towards the end. I guess it's going to cost me the good will of a few readers! It just sort of ended up that way I'm afraid. When I wrote this last part I was going slower, and spent quite a lot of time on a few shorter scenes in the amphitheater. In case it helps you to know: There will be two more mid-length scenes in the amphitheater after this one (~5000 words each), then a much longer climactic scene for the rite of offering (8000+ words), then one more short chapter to wrap it up (~3000 words), followed by a very short epilogue. I hope you will enjoy the rest!

Nice to make an example of a very naughty girl, but I'm starting to feel like Yvonne a little bit. Will be nice to enjoy a little release with the upcoming chapters.

And I'm not complaining because I really enjoy your writing style and still loving the entire book. I hope you keep it coming, but just like Christmas I'll have to wait to unwrap your final gifts for us.

Hi again dkelley2112 and thanks for your kind comments. All being well, a dickgirl Mrs Claus will be bringing some release for you, and for poor Yvonne, around about Christmas time! (Though of course it depends a bit on the Literotica moderation elves. Don't want to overwork the poor critters during their holidays.)

I have really enjoyed reading this series, very hot sex scenes!

Thanks SexualisPhantasia! Great to see that you made it this far. You have some serious stamina!