All Comments on 'Sisterhood Pt. 02'

... an equally enthralling second! How about going for another? Well done -- again; five stars -- again!

Very hot. More. Five stars.

Thanks for the feedback. I am contemplating a part 3. First 2 parts seem to be well received so I might give it a shot. Thanks again. Andy

Superb - a really enjoyable second chapter, which is tantalizing, highly erotic and intriguing in equal measure... I Look forward to reading part 3...

Very good start, nice that you didn't go to hard on her to start.. Looking forward to her being push beyond her limits

I'm not much into BDSM, but you've got me hooked. Stacey's care for Becky's safety is really heartwarming, as is Becky's trust in her sister. Their relationship is what gives this story another dimension. Unfortunately by now it seems you decided not to continue with the story.

I wondered if Stacy was careless when there wasn't clear consent from Becky's side. Did Becky really want what happened? How could Stacy tell?

You also got me thinking with that borderline incest line. Would Stacy using the paddle on her sister be considered sexual activity (=incest)? Would Stacy tying up Becky be considered sexual activity? Forcing her to expose herself? I guess everyone has to find their own answer.

Well written, realistic and what a shame there is no more.

Hi folks. I'm not done with this series. I plan to write more when I get round to it. All comments are much appreciated. Thanks Andy

This is a very interesting concept--- you have introduced a few characters that have some "flexibility"-- I appreciate the dual conflict in the sisters-- both of them trying to adjust to a new relationship. Thank you for going slow and giving us time to get to know them better before you move into more erotic fare.

Two suggestions - you could spend a bit more time talking about the physical reaction of Becky to her submission and work on giving more voice to the sisters "inner" talk