by jojopita
I know you have more ideas for this story line, can't wait to see what you come up with. I loved reading Gor when I was younger, it helped me into the lifestyle.
Oh yes, please stick with this theme, but maybe you will get more followers in sci-fi. Not sure, but love the Gorean theme.
Great start..much promise. A good second chapter and this could be an excellent series.
Or do you need a firm hand to encourage you?